tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8961868533957256118.post6377730143243756672..comments2024-03-27T17:30:53.755-07:00Comments on Whatever I Think Of!: 5 Quick Writing Fixes-WritersLife.orgJamie Ghionehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06508410672881133235noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8961868533957256118.post-18299710092479198512016-08-27T15:10:18.311-07:002016-08-27T15:10:18.311-07:00Great suggestions. It doesn't matter how exper...Great suggestions. It doesn't matter how experienced you are, things like 'passive voice' still seems to creep up on a story. Computer Tutorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00938856237984732342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8961868533957256118.post-51642996930088584832016-08-10T06:11:04.348-07:002016-08-10T06:11:04.348-07:00I'm over here from Stephanie Faris's blog....I'm over here from Stephanie Faris's blog. Great advice for writing fixes. I need all the advice I can get! Valerie Cappshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12693254213178477800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8961868533957256118.post-69525611971348293892016-08-05T13:38:35.675-07:002016-08-05T13:38:35.675-07:00I was told I use "look" and variations o...I was told I use "look" and variations of it a lot. But it's hard because so often that's how we know things happen...we SEE them! We look around when we walk in somewhere. We stare at someone. Our eyes are a lot of what we do. But I've been trying to work on other senses and not rely so much on what my characters see.Stephanie Farishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10461865229341760836noreply@blogger.com