tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8961868533957256118.post7812744408336183237..comments2024-03-28T13:34:19.210-07:00Comments on Whatever I Think Of!: What Do Editors Hate?Jamie Ghionehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06508410672881133235noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8961868533957256118.post-72671192048347784512017-09-18T14:05:20.591-07:002017-09-18T14:05:20.591-07:00Showing not telling is a pitfall for many. I susp...Showing not telling is a pitfall for many. I suspect it is true because the point the author is trying to make is so very important to them.<br />I hope you hear back from the editor soon.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8961868533957256118.post-84664617711424219282017-09-18T12:30:35.842-07:002017-09-18T12:30:35.842-07:00You know, Jamie, that paragraph is really well wri...You know, Jamie, that paragraph is really well written. My only thought would be to tighten it up just a little. But it's very visual. I really like it.<br />Showing not telling is always challenging.Sandra Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03814573408898140885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8961868533957256118.post-70580786182384342682017-09-18T11:45:09.534-07:002017-09-18T11:45:09.534-07:00Editors can definitely make a piece SO much strong...Editors can definitely make a piece SO much stronger. And their feedback can HURT, seriously! But I always compare it to working out at the gym. You have to tear a muscle in order for it to grow back stronger...same with writing!Stephanie Farishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10461865229341760836noreply@blogger.com