Friday, September 8, 2017

How to Use Other Writers as Inspiration for Your Book

From Writerslife.org:


How To Use Other Writers As Inspiration For Your Book - Writer's Life.org


Every good writer knows that reading is the key to writing a good book. Finding inspiration from other writers is natural and a fantastic part of the writing process. In fact, it’s what inspires many of us to try our hand at writing our own books in the first place.
From heart-wrenching romances to epic adventures, any book that you read is likely to have been inspired by another writer. That’s not to say that all stories are simply copies of others, but that even the greatest writers of our time will happily tell you that some of their ideas and inspiration came from reading other people’s work.
People have been telling stories since the dawn of time, so it’s no wonder that many contemporary books are derivatives of a story that came before them.
Of course, there is a line. And it’s essential that writers understand where that line is and make sure they don’t cross it. They say that imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, but when it comes to ripping off ideas from another writer's work, you are more likely to find them disgruntled and possibly ready to take action against you if you are lazy about how you use other writer’s ideas.
So how do you use other writers as inspiration for your book without being criticised or creating the possibility of a lawsuit looming down your neck? No respected writer wants to be accused of simply stealing the ideas from another, so making sure that you get the balance right is important.

Here’s how you do it:

Read widely
The more widely you read, the more likely you are to be inspired by a range of writers; therefore it will be less tempting and harder to ‘accidentally’ steal another writer's ideas or just copy their writing style.

Never copy word for word
Never lift someone else’s words and try to pass them off as your own. You will get caught, and your reputation as a writer will be destroyed too.

Think carefully about where your ideas came from
Sometimes we might think we’ve had an original idea, but when we examine where it came from, and we suddenly realise it’s because we read so-and-so. Always try to understand how and why you have thought of a particular story and make sure you aren’t just directly stealing it from someone else.

Always give your ideas a unique twist
As we’ve said before, it is OK to be inspired by other stories you’ve read, but don’t make yours exactly the same. Use bits of that story to inform your own, give yours a unique twist, and a different perspective to ensure it doesn’t feel to same-y to your readers.

Write in your own unique voice
Finding your writing voice is so important, and doing so will make your writing always feel authentically your own.

Be happy to credit other authors for inspiring you
If there is a reason why you want to lift ideas from another story, be sure not to try and deny all knowledge of doing so. Saying you were inspired by such and such a writer can make all the difference. If you are open and honest about it, people are far more likely to respect that.

Ask them if it’s OK
Of course, a more direct approach is to contact the author in question explain that you loved their work and tell them about your ideas - ask them if they are happy with your writing and see what they say.

Don’t ‘jump on the bandwagon.’
Sometimes there is a craze for new sorts of writing where one book will become a bestseller such as Harry Potter or 50 Shades of Grey, and suddenly hundreds of poor imitations spring up into existence. Don’t write a story just for the sake of it. Write it because it’s the story you’ve always been dying to share with the world.

Stay true to yourself and the story you are trying to tell
If you have a story that is burning inside you, it’s your story to tell - try always to stay true to that - you’ll know if you’re not. Writing something that you know is unique yours is a wonderful feeling, and far superior to simply trying to imitate something someone else has written already.

We know that every story has been inspired in one way or another, by a story that has come before it - and that’s OK. By using the tips above you will be telling your story, in your way, and that’s what good, original writing is all about.

As some of you may know from reading my blog, it was reading Prozac Nation that made me want to write my own story of being on the medication. I'd wanted to to write something I felt was meaningful to me and my experience with accepting my depression seemed to be the perfect subject.  For a while, however, I was discouraged by the idea, thinking my story was just too similar, that I was stealing Elizabeth Wurtzel's thunder by writing on the subject of Prozac. Wurtzel was considered the Generation X face of the iconic drug (noted in the video below) thanks to her best-selling book. 



I felt there could only be one book on such a subject and that it had already been written. But others I knew convinced me that it doesn't matter that other people have written on a similar topic, that everyone has an entirely different story to tell. Everyone's experience is different. Each person's backstory is what sets their story apart. A local bar owner in my home town wrote a memoir on how she dealt with her husband's alcoholism. Plenty of people have had alcoholic relatives, but how many such people are Christian women who owner a bar dominated by motorcycle-riding patrons? This is the author's backstory here.

As if she knew what someone else might be thinking one day, Wurtzel noted in the epilogue of her iconic memoir that:
“…The fact that depression is ‘up in the air’ can be both the cause and the result of a level of societal malaise that that so many feel.  But once someone is a clinical case, once someone is in a hospital bed or in stretcher headed for the morgue, his story is absolutely and completely his own. Every person who has experienced a severe depression has his own sad, awful tale to tell, his own mess to live through. …” 

Similarly, in her depression memoir Willow Weep for Me: A Black Woman's Journey Through Depression, Meri Nana-Ama Danquah quotes the editor she worked under at The Washington Post as suggesting she write a piece on her depression, asking if she'd read William Styron's book on depression (he doesn't mention the book by name) and that if Danquah were to write a piece, she would have to avoid repeating what had already been said, which he felt would be hard to do, Danquah's reply to this was:


Yeah, right. Like Styron and I would have the same angle on anything. We had the same illness; the similarities end there. The way I did depression was a-whole-nother bag of beans. I’m a single black mother about half a paycheck away from the government cheese line.” 

Again, it was as if the author knew that someone might be thinking something similar one day down the road.  Danquah definitely had something different to say on the subject, presenting it from the perspective of a black woman. 

I noted these two quotes in the new epilogue I recently wrote for my memoir. I hope to be able to obtain permission to use them in the final product if one day my story sees the light of day.

My friend at the behavioral health center said that Prozac Nation was ahead of its time. It was written in 1994, only seven years after the drug had been approved for use as an antidepressant. He did not begin taking the drug until 2001, after the 9/11 attacks. I myself did not begin until 2015, about 15 years after a failed treatment (in my mind) on several other antidepressants including Paxil. Somehow the psychiatrist I'd seen then did not think of prescribing Prozac, which was the first SSRI on the market and the most well-known one (This is one of the things I noted in my memoir). It wasn't until the mid- to late-1990s that Prozac became a well-known name, even though it was introduced in 1987. Wurtzel was one of the first people to be prescribed Prozac, which one of the things that makes her story stand out. In the video above, she felt writing about her experience would be something people can relate to. I certainly felt that way after reading her book. And now I'm trying to tell a story others can relate to, offering my point of view. 

As for jumping on the "bandwagon," I have tried not to do that. It has been more than 20 years since the iconic Prozac Nation was written and Danquah's memoir (though not as well-known) was published in 1998, almost two decades ago.  But the subject of depression is universal and still occurs, so there can be ways to offer a new perspective on the subject.

I can bet that reading Twilight has inspired a number of other vampire novels, though some, like The Vampire Diaries, preceded Twilight. Stephenie Meyer was said to have come up with the idea for her Twilight series from a dream. I can imagine that others one day may have a similar dream and think that it will make a great book. if so, they can write it. It  won't be the exactly the same dream Meyer had, but others will be likely interested based on the popularity of the vampire novel. 

How have other writes been inspiring to you?
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Thursday, September 7, 2017

Editing Your Own Writing. Can You Ever Be “Done”?

This was the title of a blog post I came across today. Read the full story here.

When is a book finished? And other writerly ponderings…
I finished the first draft of my first novel, Art and Soul, back in November 2014. I spent two months editing, then sent the manuscript to my first two readers. While they were reading, I read a couple of books on self-editing and realized I’d committed a lot of glaring errors.
I used my readers’ feedback and what I’d learnt from the books to do another complete manuscript “fix”. I then sent this draft to more readers. Their feedback resulted in more re-writes, particularly to the beginning of chapter 1, which I freely admit I’m still not 100% happy with.
The writer funny by Tom Gauld cartoon writing problems
The title sums up how I have been feeling when editing my memoir. I still have yet to give my current version of my manuscript to others to read. I'd sent my initial one that was only 87 pages to several people, mostly as a PDF by email. None have seen the current version as of yet.  I want to get some feedback on the current one, though I'm not sure who to send it to.  I still have not found a writing group nearby, or found anyone interesting in reading it. And I'm already fretting over finding and being able to afford an editor. I now wonder how many more rewrites I'll feel compelled to do after I get any feedback whatsoever from anyone.  

Proofreading missing words typos cartoon

I didn’t expect to find much to change. And certainly no typos. After all, it’s been past eight beta readers who have all found different small errors which I have fixed. Surely there couldn’t be any more?
Well there were. In fact, by the time I got to “The End” I had made 298 notes (the Kindle comes in useful again!). That’s 298 edit points. Admittedly, many of these are “delete comma” or “check formatting”. But there were also things I remembered I’d never felt quite happy about. For example, there are three chapters (three!) with endings I feel are somehow “weak”.
On the bright side, I found myself drawn to my characters again and genuinely looking forward to the next chapter, even though I know exactly what’s going to happen. I hope this is a good sign. I’m guessing if your own work bores you silly, it’s likely to bore your readers too.
Now this is true of me. Lately whenever I look over even just one chapter of my memoir,  I still see some typos or some necessary word(s) omitted. Things Spellcheck won't catch.  I knew this would occur.  Now I want to know how others, if at all, see my chapters as weak. 

BTW, I've been taking a break from working on my memoir and last night began writing are notes for another story I'd begun several months ago. I've been waiting to work on this one are and now I have.

Wednesday, September 6, 2017

Chapter Break Bingo – September 2017

Here is the new card for September. Once again, I'll see how many squares I can fulfill.

Here’s a recap for clarity (with specific dates for example):

Sept 6 – new bingo card available

Oct 2 – Julie and I will post our Sept completed bingo cards. You can link up your bingo cards in this post

Oct 3 – new bingo card available

Nov 2 – Julie and I will post our October completed bingo cards. You can link up your bingo cards in this post. We will also be posting the Sept winner of the most squares in this post.

And so on and so forth.

Here is what I am reading:
  1. Truly Madly Guilty--Liane Moriarty (4 squares): Library Book, Audiobook, Gregarious, Betrayal
  2. Beautiful Ruins--Jess Walter (3 squares): Water on the Cover, Physical Book, New To You Author
  3. The Trouble With Magic--Madelyn Alt (3 squares): In a Series, Shelf Love, Naive/Inexperienced
  4. The Chickens and the City Council of San Juan Bautista--Paul J. Shanley (1 square): Creature, Mythical or Not
  5. I Can't Make This Up--Kevin Hart (1 square): Accident 
  6. All the Bright Places--Jennifer Niven (3 squares): Contemporary, Friends to Lovers, Loved It
  7. Holding Up the Universe--Jennifer Niven (3 squares): Set in a School, Verb in Title, Free Space
  8. Victoria and Albert--Richard Hough (1 square): Royalty
  9. Everyone's Dead But Us--Mark Richard Zubro (1 square): No Kids
  10. Ming Tea Murder--Laura Childs (1 square): Coffee or Tea
  11. Pirates--Linda Lael Miller (3 squares): Pirates, Free Book, Hunter
  12. Best. Night. Ever.--Jen Malone and Others (1 square): Compilation
Challenge completed on September 26. 25 squares completed.
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Monday, September 4, 2017

Trying to Decide on Reading Challenge Topics for 2018


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It's still early, but I just got to thinking about what reading challenges I'm going to host next year. Signup announcements on blogs and websites that host the challenges start popping up as early as November and for the last two years, I got ahead of the game by coming up with ideas as early as summer time.  But this year, I've been so preoccupied with writing my memoir that I didn't start thinking about challenges until today.  Since I'm so into working on a memoir, I'd love to do a memoir challenge again next year. I'm not sure on the format, but was thinking of doing a checklist this time rather than the bingo-card one I did this year. Participants will be able to choose what memoir topics they want to read while meeting a minimum number of books (all this and other guidelines to be determined later).

But I'm not too certain on whether to offer the other challenges I did this year. Since 2016, I've been hosting the Literary Loners Challenge (the first challenge I ever hosted), but am not too sure about bringing that one back.




Also this year, I hosted two new challenges: Humor and Epistolary.  I might consider bring one or both of those back, but am not too sure.


10 Epistolary Books To Add To Your Winter Reading List


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This year, there was a Creativity Reading Challenge, but the blog hosting that one has been deleted. I'm still reading for this one, however, as it is an interesting topic for a reading challenge.  maybe I'll consider picking up this one or doing a similar challenge topic.



I may even come up with another idea altogether. If that happens, I will let you know. 

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Sunday, September 3, 2017

Easy Ways to Polish Your Novel

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Easy Ways To Polish Your Novel - Writer's Life.org




When it comes to editing we must face facts. Time, effort and attention to detail are all crucial if you really want to get your novel in the best shape possible, and ensure that it is ready to go to print or to be sent off to agents and publishers.
However, sometimes we are not in the mood to spend our time pouring laboriously over our books and need some short and sweet quick fixes that deliver a big impact but don’t require too much brain power!
So, with that in mind, here are some simple, easy solutions to help authors quickly polish their novels when they want to make some progress.

Find and replace
If you know or suspect you over use a word do a simple search on your computer to find all up all instances of it, then you can replace it with an alternative or delete it altogether to ensure you don’t sound repetitive!

Using an app
Use an app such as Grammarly to help you discover spelling and grammar errors. You can simply paste in chapters and it will help highlight them as well as tell you what you should do instead - a quick and hassle-free way of polishing your book.

Looking for unusual synonyms
Pay attention to the descriptive words you’ve used in your novel. If you come across something a little bland or cliched think about how you can change it to make it more unique and compelling. Using a thesaurus can help you create new, unusual ways of describing things which will surprise and delight your reader.

Reading for inspiration
If you aren’t in the mood for editing you can always do some reading and research to find inspiration for your book instead. Reading is always pleasurable and doing so is a great way to discover a new direction or exciting and unusual ideas for your own novel.

Highlighting things to come back to
Inconsistencies, clutter, parts that just don’t ‘sit right’… when you read through your novel you are bound to come across examples of all of these. However, instead of trying to fix them right away, simply highlight them, make a few notes and come back to them later. This way you can get through a lot more of your book in one session and feel you have made good progress.

Do some cutting
There is nothing more satisfying than being brave and bold with your book and just cutting out sentences, paragraphs, even whole chapters that you know, deep down, simply don’t work. It can be hard to part with those carefully crafted words, but if you do you’ll realise how much better your book reads without them.

Polishing your novel can be extremely rewarding and these quick fixes are great for when you want to make good headway in your editing without having to use too much brain power! Why not give them a try?

This is pretty much what I have been doing with my memoir. Most of these except for using an app.  The Grammarly app sounds like a good tool. I'd read about it on another person's blog and that it catches errors in grammar, something Spellcheck doesn't catch.  All too often, I'd look through my written work and see error such an omitted word or two or a misspelling as such "then" when I mean "them" (or vice versa). Spellcheck will recognize either word as spelled correctly, but cannot determine the context in which the word has been used. I'm just hesitant about getting apps such as these.
Early on, I found myself trying not to get repetitive and looking for instances in which I sounded that way. Just what I did right now 🙂
As for highlighting things to come back to later, I haven't exactly been doing that one--at least not in the way that has been suggested.  I've often been looking over one to three chapters per day and finding things I want to cut or replace, then making my chosen changes right away, so I won't forget. It just works easier this way for me. I guess everyone can do this in the way they find best for them.  As long as as you get this done.
Avoiding cliches was one of the things we discussed in the memoir writing class I took over the summer.  In the mini-memoir draft I submitted for the class, I'd used the phrase "final nail in the coffin," which the teacher said was an example of a cliche.  I am now trying to determine if the phrase "making a big deal out of nothing" can be considered a cliche.  BTW, the advanced memoir writing class by the same teacher will be taking place on Wednesdays nights in October and November. 
And of course, I'm always reading something, even if it's not something that inspires me. But I still keep reading.

Friday, September 1, 2017

Bookish Bingo: Fall 2017

Here is the new card for the Fall Bingo at Pretty Deadly Reviews.



Yay, it’s that time again! Time for another round of Bookish Bingo. If you’re new to Bookish Bingo, it is a three month long reading challenge dedicated to expanding our reading horizons. There is a bingo board and thereupon are 24 challenges. The objective is to make bingo as many times as you can. The only rule is that you cannot use the same book for more than one square. You do not need a blog to participate – all you have to do is comment down below.
Here is the new board for the months of September, October, and November.

Here is what I am reading:
  1. American History: Little House on the Prairie--Laura Ingalls Wilder
  2. Ensemble Cast: Truly Madly Guilty--Liane Moriarty
  3. Set in Another Country: Beautiful Ruins--Jess Walter
  4. Witches: The Trouble With Magic--Madelyn Alt
  5. Black Cover: Eminent Victorians--Lytton Strachey
  6. Person on the Cover: I Can't Make This Up--Kevin Hart
  7. Mental Health: All the Bright Places--Jennifer Niven
  8. Set at a School: Holding Up the Universe--Jennifer Niven
  9. LGBT: Everyone's Dead But Us--Mark Richard Zubro
  10. Free Space: Patterns in the Sand--Sally Goldenbaum
  11. Paranormal: Pirates--Linda Lael Miller
  12. Co-Authored: Best. Night. Ever.--Jen Malone and Others
  13. Required Reading: Agnes Grey--Anne Bronte
  14. Poetry or Verse: The Fall of the House of Usher and Four Other Tales--Edgar Allan Poe
  15. Magic in the Real World: Aunt Dimity and the Village Witch--Nancy Atherton
  16. Illustrations: Dear Dumb Diary: My Pants Are Haunted--Jim Benton
  17. Horror: The Shack--Willam Paul Young
  18. Asian-American Author: Goodbye, Vitamin--Rachel Khong
  19. Translated: The Way to Paradise--Mario Vargas Llosa
  20. First in a Series: Bloodlines--Richelle Mead
  21. Yellow Cover: The Girl With All the Gifts--M.R. Carey
  22. Over 500 Pages: Nicholas Nickelby--Charles Dickens
  23. 2017 Debut: Dear Martin--Nic Stone
  24. Fall Release: Snow & Rose--Emily Winfield Martin
  25. Different Culture: Desperately Seeking Paradise--Ziauddin Sardar
Challenge completed on November 18